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The sound beats softly in my ear
never had it once been so clear
the rhythmic beat, that thump
I can hear your heart jump

It is a new sound for me
reopening eyes anew to see
Just a little closer now
listen to my heart's earnest vow

The sound different from all the rest
I zealously listen to your chest
There is a soft and gentle beat
all the things that are all too sweet

I begin listening to your past
that's when the beat gets fast
seemingly coated with a little damage
I'm very glad you had come to manage

Fading in and out, once was happiness
then you became drowned in more sadness
but the sound is getting much better
I can tell through your warm sweater

Your heart truly is a different sound
it is a treasure to be found
Here it is beating next to mine
the different sounds will now entwine.


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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sweet
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
thanks!
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innov8tor00 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmmm? sooo he wore a sweater? lol
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:iconremnantdoomblossom:
RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
pfft, get outta here!
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely perfect. :heart:
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! I'm very glad you think so! :D
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ExpressKeeluh Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty :heart:
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!
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