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I am perplexed by this feeling
one that changes my heart’s pace
It sends my tortured mind reeling
Even with closed eyes I can see your face.
It’s a torturous craving as it develops deeper
Words of sincerity and affection is what you feed
as you teasingly whisper in my ear, “You’re a keeper.”
Then my heart skips a beat as you make a confession
you said that with me you feel utterly complete
“Will you be mine?” was your gentle question
Now forever my heart will keep this rapid beat.
one that changes my heart’s pace
It sends my tortured mind reeling
Even with closed eyes I can see your face.
Simply the thought of you evokes a craving
to feel the tender caress of your fingers
I do not understand how my heart is behaving
Effortlessly, everything of you lingers.
It’s a torturous craving as it develops deeper
Words of sincerity and affection is what you feed
as you teasingly whisper in my ear, “You’re a keeper.”
Then my heart skips a beat as you make a confession
you said that with me you feel utterly complete
“Will you be mine?” was your gentle question
Now forever my heart will keep this rapid beat.
Literature
Let the Fall Make You Stronger.
"Hey! Are you all right?"
"Sure, why wouldn't I be?"
"Um...because you just fell from the roof of the hou-"
"See, that's where you're wrong. I didn't fall. The floor challenged me and I accepted."
"And how did that go for you?"
"The floor won. But only because it had the advantage."
"Of being non sentient and vast in size, along with the fact that there is a freaking storm out!!"
"Nope. I just attacked from the wrong position."
"Backwards?"
"I overestimated my skills."
"I'll say. You're bleeding!"
"Only a little. Ask me again."
"What?"
"If I'm fine."
"Are you?"
"Nope."
"Is it because you're bleeding?"
"You're supposed to ask
Literature
Two Years Later
She asked him gently, “Do you love me?”
In his long silence, she found closure,
And left her love under a willow tree.
Literature
...
I didn't
build
this castle
so you could
sit on
your throne
of
lies.
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This is very sweet! You're describing someone who had felt love in the first time of his life.