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You made your home in my mind
but you also vacation to my heart
my feelings for you cannot be defined
shamelessly, I do not want a restart. 

You consume my thoughts gently
as you sit quietly in the warm sand
my heart now works differently
as you calmly take my eager hand. 

You spend most time perfectly still
enjoying my heart's new and dazed song
in my heart, you feelings did instill
as you whisper for me to remain strong. 

You said in time things will change
that you will still reside with me
you tell me not to feel so strange
you let our toes get touched by the sea. 

You smile oh so softly with eyes alight
held my hands tight and tenderly you say
"If you ever miss me, you can just write."
Though you are scared, you say you'll stay. 

And I ever so gently kiss your cheek
but try to push you from my mind
yet, with you the world is less bleak
so I decide to remain waiting and behind. 

Saying to you, "Forever you have residency."

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butter-holiday Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
This is so nice Heart 
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
I'm very glad that you think so!
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"residency"  lol I prefer to think of it as a portion, a "fraction" if you will, of one's heart.

Some peoples' hearts are so split, to so many individuals they lose themselves.


Great work.
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much!
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:)
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Well done, this was a extremely powerful poem that I could imagine the whole scene. :clap:
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
thanks
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, your welcome.
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is so cool, lovely places for the heart to go, nice job
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RemnantDoomBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you very much!
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